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on A young journalist must turn detective when he gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy behind the Jack the Ripper murders.

It's punchy and informative but for me, does not leave me wanting more. I think something original to grab my attention is needed.
on When her bandmates get implicated in a bad drug deal, a geek must gather ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

Yes it's an oddball comedy, and the seagull caper is that in Kings Cross, a percentage of pills dropped on the ground are eaten by greedy seagulls. If you find a dead seagull, you get a free pill. New version:…
on A bereaved businessman becomes obsessed with the identity of an amnesia sufferer who saves his life only to become embroiled in a supernatural conflict that threatens to claim everything he holds close.

I'm pretty new at this, but it feels like too much info, and it's a bit confusing. Businessmen don't seem that interesting- Could he be described another way? "Everything he holds close" seems a bit cliche. Maybe the specifics of…