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on When a sexually repressed teenage boy with a sex therapist mother is approached by his money savvy high school classmate, together they start a sex therapy business at school.

I love 'Sex Education'. One thing that is unclear in your logline is the wording. 'Together'? comes across as the 'sexually repressed teenager', the 'sex therapist mother' and the 'savvy high school classmate' running the business as a trio, whereas…
on After his wife of 48 years asks for a divorce, an eccentric old codger embraces single life and modern dating in the search for a new girlfriend.

This is a cool idea.
on An old, lonely, bitter boxing trainer gets one last shot to groom a winner when a trailer trash waitress convinces him to train her.

Why is it his one last shot?
on After losing her pilot training scholarship, a dorky girl joins forces with a group of air hostesses to help them smuggle blood diamonds from Sierra Leone.

Set in the 2000's, during the Sierra Leone civil war. The girl loses her scholarship funding because of the effect 9/11 has on the aviation industry. Her goal is to become a pilot. She becomes involved in smuggling diamonds to…