NinaS

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on When a nine-year-old, native American boy is struck by lightning and initiated to be the next tribal shaman, he must battle his vengeful Uncle who murdered his father, and protect the world from the dark forces that seek to destroy it.

I think Dkpough1 has said it all! I just wanted to say I'm intrigued by this concept and would want to watch this movie. Good luck with your project. :)
on A decorated officer must apprehend his son, an escaped convict.

I agree with Mike and Gianni's above points. It sounds intriguing, but as it is, we don't know? what the inciting incident is, which is what Mike is saying in his comment above. What happens to the decorated officer to…
on When his wife appears on his organisation’s hitlist 10 years after they told him she was murdered, a nostalgic assassin seeks to join forces with her to unravel the depths of the company’s deception.

Hi Mike, I'm new to this loglining, but just wanted to say I'd watch this film! Sounds intriguing. Good luck with it! Cheers, Nina
on Broken hearted and riddled with terrifying nightmares, a once sassy Skylar Claymore struggles to get her mojo back. The loss of her husband, her home, her unborn baby and her job drives Skylar to become a drunken loose cannon. When she survives a home invasion and attempted rape, Skylar finds self-defense classes at a martial arts school to combat her fears and nightmares. When the Grandmaster unlocks a hidden talent, Skylar is drawn into an underground legion of martial artists. An excommunicated blood-thirsty member of the secret group threatens to destroy the heart of the legion. Skylar must learn to master her darkest fears to protect it.

Thank you for all of your feedback so far - very much appreciated. I'm still working on it - but here is my attempt at the short logline version: "When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden…