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on When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a corrupt politician. Coming to terms with the source will force the human race to address the deepest held beliefs and divisions in a world where there can be no secrets.

Hi JasonF, I'd remove the second part of your logline, i?think its better?like that: When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a…
on When demons plan to steal the devils throne, a greedy rich lawyer dealing for his soul is the only one able to do something about it.

Hello dpg and Richiev, thank you very much for your reviews. I dont think the logline can manage to describe if the character is sympathetic or not. F.e: The Jaws logline just describes the hero as "local sheriff", we cant…