Pamsson

I appreciate the feedback. This is the latest version of it before I saw everyone's comments: "A sneaker store owner must choose between his profitable illegal gun business and his pregnant wife, a community organizer, amid the neighborhood he destroys."

I actually think this is much better but still could use some help: "A community activist's husband must choose between his profitable illegal gun store and his family amid a world of violence he helped to create."

I'm amending it to "A successful illegal gun store owner and father to be chases freedom from a world of violence he helped to create."