Peter Van Schellebeck

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on The most famous serial killer of the year has gotten very lonely. Wishing to have a friend who would accept him, joins a support group with very different and grotesque addicted people. One of those people is an overworked Agent who is part of a case to catch the most famous serial killer of the year.

Has an unusual premise, though I'm not sure what the dramatic question is?
on When her company appoints a popular new CEO, a middle-aged company PR must battle to keep her job, expose the CEO’s fraud, and protect her family from his revenge.

This logline could benefit from changes to the grammar to make it easier to read. :-) * Testing 1, 2,3