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on When fantasy characters invade the big city’s system, a frustrated dreamer must deal his imaginary robot girlfriend came to life, but when she remembers being someone who was kidnapped years ago by the head of organized crime, they must team up to unravel the mysteries of the other characters past lifes by using brute force and a two-faced mask to cover their insecurities.

Hi, I think you have a good start, but I think you need to keep it short. The first one is good in length but when your doing it your missing the death steaks. So for both make it clear…
on An earnest biology teacher struggles to stop the U.S. military from weaponizing a space-borne virus when his infected students show signs of telepathy.

That's an interesting idea, but what is the death stakes, Is the teacher afraid of someone noticing the student showing signs of telepathy? Or is the student using it to harm people or is the teacher afraid more people will…
on While a timid heiress plans to overthrow her abusive mother, a disenfranchised heir to the wealthiest family in the U.S struggles with his responsibility after his grandfather puts his inheritance up for grabs in his will.

I think the logline is to long for me, I'm trying to see who the antagonist is here and who the protagonist is and the death steaks but I get lost half way through, then It just leaves me blank…
on A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.

sounds like an interesting concept.