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Harriet Quimby, America’s first licensed female pilot in 1911, said all she wanted was “to be first.” She wasn’t afraid to die trying.
Harriet, in my vision, should go to HBO...a tv series. If you could read this script, you will cry...I guarantee it. I spent 15 years researching her. Yes, her life is more fascinating than Amelia's. I know all about Amelia,…
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Ebabe makes a living “doing Ebay.” She discovers that Ebay is not what you think it is. Her life has now become an “Eventure.”
thanks for your time and effort. i just read a very long article, which i'd be happy to forward to you, if you send me your email. it says "...learn to be brief..." i'm going to re-write this one.
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Trouble occurs in the casino night clubs. Tough men and one woman are hired to control the crowds. Can they control themselves?
your email is not there. here's mine: sdawnbrown811@aol i'll forward the article to you.
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Trouble occurs in the casino night clubs. Tough men and one woman are hired to control the crowds. Can they control themselves?
thanks. i just read a long article by a film producer. he looks at inktip regularly. he says that the best log lines ... well, here's his quote...."Learn to be as brief as possible...." Here's two of his best read…
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Larry Anglestand, the “Fudge King” is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.
the year, 1964, separates this script from others that might be similar, although i would find that hard to believe considering the circumstances to this real crime, and the fact that homosexual activity was AGAINST THE LAW. and, that the…
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Larry Anglestand, the “Fudge King” is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.
Hello. Thanks for your comment. My view of log lines is that they must attract the reader to go further...to read the synopsis and then hopefully to read the script. If Nike's log line is "do it", that's all you…
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When a heartless Government agent is forced to battle his fathers death, he vowes to help the people he was once hired to hate, but when his 100th patient is a serial killer it’s time to crunch the numbers.
"heartless" should be removed and "crunch the numbers" should be changed to exactly what you mean - too open to interpretation and perhaps is not relevant.
