Sylia Gray

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on When a disgraced mermaid crown princess is banished to the human world, her kingdom is thrown into chaos as her wicked sisters scheme to fill the void and only she can stop them.

I don't think most people would know what a "merprincess" is though. Thanks for you feedback.
on When a disgraced mermaid crown princess is banished to the human world, her kingdom is thrown into chaos as her wicked sisters scheme to fill the void and only she can stop them.

But is it an improvement from my original version?
on Remy Moreau – a crusty crawfisherman who lost everything between Katrina and the Deepwater Horizon spill – is about to commit suicide in the marsh, when he discovers a mysterious trinket that he desperately hopes will lead him to a legendary treasure left behind by pirate Jean Lafitte.

Character names shouldn't be in loglines. Their names are irrelevant for a logline