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on Fifteen years after fleeing a botched robbery, a reformed Marine returns home to find his wife and son kidnapped by the crew he betrayed—forcing him into a brutal race against time to save his family and finish a war he thought was over.

great emphasis on the backstory in the logline. interesting indeed, our protagonist is not just any guy or a husband, he is a man with some serious past, and he is a marine. fleeing the scene, then joined the forces…
on A hot- tempered uncle accidentally slaps a nagging woman over an ownership of a compound wall, issue soon spirals into a building-wide sensationalised political circus of gossip, mockery, legalities, and indifference.

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