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on Tired of being hated, a clever rat creates a fake bushy tale to blend with the beloved squirrel’s, but must keep up the facade or lose the squirrel of his dreams.

Nice logline, seems like it would be a good pixar/disney type movie! Would definitely be interested to hear more of this.
on A lonely teenager becomes romantically involved with a girl who recently lost her sister, after he fabricates the death of his twin brother, who abandoned him to attend a soccer-team summer camp.

Don't think you need the "who abandoned ..." part.