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When a star studded, self-centered young talented musician lusting for the lifestyle of a rockstar, scores him and his band of brothers a chance to be signed and mentored by one of the music industry’s big time acts, he must wrestle with the rewards and pitfalls of stardom, love, and loyalty in the music industry in order to maintain his integrity as an artist and become a better man to those around him.
"self-centered young talented musician" = protagonist "scores a chance into music industry’s big time acts" = inciting incident Great logline! Clear statement of protagonist's character flaw - self-centered. Then BANG! their dreams come true with an inciting incident. How will a selfish person behavRead more
“self-centered young talented musician” = protagonist
“scores a chance into music industry’s big time acts” = inciting incident
Great logline! Clear statement of protagonist’s character flaw – self-centered. Then BANG! their dreams come true with an inciting incident. How will a selfish person behave, when suddenly they get what they want? Lots of potential for conflict there.
Question: Who then is the antagonist? There’s a suggestion of wrestling with rewards and pitfalls, but the statement feels abstract. Difficult to imagine in any concrete sense. But if a bad guy was thrown in?
And this villain character, what if they were, well you know, really nice? Likeable in fact, call them selfless, generous, and caring. Quite a contrast here, and one that may even imply the character arc, more than simply stating “a better man to those around him”.
Through profoundly different stories, it kind’a reminds me of Gone with the Wind (1939). Scarlett O’Hara an’t that nice a girl, every one around her is so much nicer. Yet we connect with this character because of her flaws, and how she struggles to amend them. Just wondering who is your Rhett Butler.in your story?
See lessThe lives of four unique midwestern friends, set in multiple timelines, are forever altered when fame chooses one of them but thrusts all of their lives into chaos.
Is the story about those who did not become famous? Or is the story about the one who became famous? From whose point of view do we see this story?
Is the story about those who did not become famous?
Or is the story about the one who became famous?
From whose point of view do we see this story?
See lessIn an effort to track down his estranged girlfriend and reconnect with her, a recovering alcoholic embarks on a cross-country journey that turns out to be poignant discovery into his past.
This is the third version of my logline. Here are the first and the second versions: 1. An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge. 2. During a cross-country journey to track his missing girlfriRead more
This is the third version of my logline. Here are the first and the second versions:
1. An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge.
See less2. During a cross-country journey to track his missing girlfriend Nisha, Dhondup finds himself reluctantly involved in the lives of people who all seem to have a connection to her in some way.