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A young man sees his dead girlfriend through near death experiences.
In the context of a logline this can be the inciting incident of the film. The premise has potential. His dramatic need to keep seeing his girlfriend can drive him to commit near death experiences. What stops him from doing so will provide the conflict necessary for a good story. So two things. JustRead more
In the context of a logline this can be the inciting incident of the film. The premise has potential. His dramatic need to keep seeing his girlfriend can drive him to commit near death experiences. What stops him from doing so will provide the conflict necessary for a good story.
So two things. Justifying the dramatic need to keep seeing her (beyond the nature of their relationship), some unfinished business or maybe the dead girlfriend leading him towards her cause of death. This could also lead you to the second thing – what’s stopping him? for instance, in this case, the forces responsible for her death could be preventing him from committing a series of NDEs.
Hope this helps.
See lessMisopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
See lessWhen Unegen meets a fellow shaman, Ghazan, at the gateway to Tam, another realm, he is gifted with a vision inducing sap. Forced to flee his tribe, Unegen finds Ghazan in the Omni Desert, where Unegen is tricked into taming a demon, that Ghazan uses as a disguise to smuggle himself past the gatekeeper, Yabash, and into Tam. Furious, the gatekeeper Yabash tasks Unegen with hunting down Ghazan.
Example logline is in the same vein as anime. Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline. Example: “A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive forceRead more
Example logline is in the same vein as anime.
Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline.
Example:
“A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive force him into the shadow realm to stop the theft of shapeshifting talisman.”
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
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