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Misopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
See lessWhen Unegen meets a fellow shaman, Ghazan, at the gateway to Tam, another realm, he is gifted with a vision inducing sap. Forced to flee his tribe, Unegen finds Ghazan in the Omni Desert, where Unegen is tricked into taming a demon, that Ghazan uses as a disguise to smuggle himself past the gatekeeper, Yabash, and into Tam. Furious, the gatekeeper Yabash tasks Unegen with hunting down Ghazan.
Example logline is in the same vein as anime. Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline. Example: “A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive forceRead more
Example logline is in the same vein as anime.
Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline.
Example:
“A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive force him into the shadow realm to stop the theft of shapeshifting talisman.”
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessIn the year 3000 from the hell-break a homeless ex-soldier is dragged unwittingly in ancient war, when is hired by group of strange creatures in search for their homeland. With the help of an ancient artefact he fights recently awaken powerful enemy in bid to deliver his clients to safety and restore the age of prosperity.
It sounds exciting, but I am a little lost. First you need to correct the grammar a bit .... "in the year 300o from the hell-break" ... why "from" .. what is the hell-break? If this is a new concept you are introducing maybe you could put "150 years on from The Hell-Break" ... but I am still not conRead more
It sounds exciting, but I am a little lost.
First you need to correct the grammar a bit …. “in the year 300o from the hell-break” … why “from” .. what is the hell-break? If this is a new concept you are introducing maybe you could put
“150 years on from The Hell-Break” … but I am still not convinced. Sounds like a sequel and I am worried I have missed something…..
“dragged unwittingly inTO an ancient war” …
“when is hired” is not good English.
“recently awaken powerful enemy” also is not good English….
Just to correct what you have put … before we can look at if the logline works:
See lessIn the year 3000, after the Hell-Break, a homeless ex-soldier is dragged unwittingly into an ancient war by a group of strange creatures in search for their homeland. With the help of an ancient artefact he fights a recently awakened powerful enemy in a bid to deliver his clients to safety and restore the age of prosperity.