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  1. Posted: December 1, 2016In: Horror

    Cherry has a unique condition: her blood sends anyone who sees or smells it into a bloodthirsty mania. When she hears of a cure, she sets off across the country, turning the road trip into a zombified hell.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 2, 2016 at 2:19 am

    The word unique suggests something is singular. If the condition is unique to the lead character, then she is the only one to have this condition. If that is the case how did someone come up with a cure to a condition only she has?

    The word unique suggests something is singular. If the condition is unique to the lead character, then she is the only one to have this condition. If that is the case how did someone come up with a cure to a condition only she has?

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  2. Posted: November 4, 2016In: Horror

    When a zombie outbreak incites a racist massacre in her small Southern town, a pregnant teen must fight the undead – and her own family – to reunite with the child’s black father.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 8, 2016 at 11:54 am

    I think people on this thread are getting caught up in the theme or 'meaning' of the concept, and forgetting about the bare necessities of a story. You can't write from a theme, but you can have a theme naturally grow out of a story. Point is, you first need to figure out what the story is going toRead more

    I think people on this thread are getting caught up in the theme or ‘meaning’ of the concept, and forgetting about the bare necessities of a story.
    You can’t write from a theme, but you can have a theme naturally grow out of a story. Point is, you first need to figure out what the story is going to be, then see what the theme is and enhance it.

    Is this a story about a character doing battle with the undead in a Zombie apocalypse?
    Or,
    Is this a story of a MC fighting racism?

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  3. Posted: October 30, 2016In: Horror

    After his best friend was used as a human sacrifice to protect a town from a mythical beast, a telepathic teenager must stop the cult from choosing his girlfriend next.

    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on October 31, 2016 at 5:25 am

    I don't think you need the first bit, that seems like backstory as it is the selection of his girlfriend that sets the story in motion. So, my version would be something like: When his girlfriend is selected to be sacrificed to please a mythical beast, a telepathic teen must return with the head ofRead more

    I don’t think you need the first bit, that seems like backstory as it is the selection of his girlfriend that sets the story in motion.
    So, my version would be something like: When his girlfriend is selected to be sacrificed to please a mythical beast, a telepathic teen must return with the head of the beast before she loses her’s.

    It’s 27 words and a hit rough, but think it has a clearer goal, a ticking clock etc.

    As said you can throw the best mate bit in the setup section of the screenplay.

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