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  1. Posted: September 25, 2022In: Thriller

    After witnessing a murder, a young woman with autism teams up with a cop to name the serial killer in order for her to stop being targeted.

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    Added an answer on October 7, 2022 at 12:29 pm

    Whose story is this, the young autistic woman's or the cop's? Whose PoV will we follow?

    Whose story is this, the young autistic woman’s or the cop’s? Whose PoV will we follow?

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2022In: Fantasy

    A geeky young woman discovers a book of fairytales that are set in a carnival in her town.

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    Added an answer on October 7, 2022 at 11:47 am

    This is the setup and the inciting incident. What happens next?

    This is the setup and the inciting incident. What happens next?

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  3. Posted: October 7, 2022In: Crime

    A disgraced ER doctor reinvents himself as an amphetamine cook getting entangled in helping members escape a community with a violent secret.

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    Added an answer on October 7, 2022 at 11:45 am

    This feels like two stories. One about an ER doc turned meth cook, and the other about someone helping people escape somewhere. Try starting with...After becoming entangled in a violent and secretive community, a disgraced ER doctor must...(insert second-act-main-action here).

    This feels like two stories. One about an ER doc turned meth cook, and the other about someone helping people escape somewhere. Try starting with…After becoming entangled in a violent and secretive community, a disgraced ER doctor must…(insert second-act-main-action here).

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