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It is year 2022′ the world has been divided into two. Nikali, the healer , an outsider to the cycle, needs to break into the cycle to get the ancestors DNA and return it back to her land. But what she does with the DNA will forever change the course of humanity.
I can't picture the world divided into two... Is it divided between, men and women? is it divided between black and white? Is it physically cut in half?
I can’t picture the world divided into two… Is it divided between, men and women? is it divided between black and white? Is it physically cut in half?
See lessA cloned Marine on shore leave is abducted by a spy who manipulates him into joining him on a covert operation on an enemy planet, to stop a rogue officer from starting an interstellar war.
Yes, delete the reference to the spy. ?The original version puts the spy in the driver's seat of the plot, makes the Marine a pawn in the spy's game, a puppet whose strings are being pulled by the spy (abduction and manipulation).The amended version (finally) seems to put the Marine in the driver'sRead more
Yes, delete the reference to the spy. ?The original version puts the spy in the driver’s seat of the plot, makes the Marine a pawn in the spy’s game, a puppet whose strings are being pulled by the spy (abduction and manipulation).
The amended version (finally) seems to put the Marine in the driver’s seat of the plot. ?Or is he?
Why MUST the Marine be abducted and manipulated? ?Why can’t he CHOOSE to go on the mission of his own free will? ?It seems to me that accepting the mission because he’s been abducted and manipulated is ?a weak motivation, the wrong reason. ?It’s feels negative, passive. ?If the Marine is more than a puppet, a pawn then I suggest he has to accept the mission of his own free will for a ?positive personal reason. ?He has to be pursuing his own object goal. ?His objective goal may be in service of a higher, greater cause, but it’s got be his choice, his goal. ?He should have skin in the game, personal stakes.
See lessA female bounty hunter holds an innocent man hostage as bait to trap his future-self: a fugitive killer from 20 years in the future able to project mind-warping illusions.
I don't know. I actually use these loglines to pitch to producers, etc. and while a logline can always be improved I tend to get superstitious and stick with whatever gets me requests for a synopsis.
I don’t know. I actually use these loglines to pitch to producers, etc. and while a logline can always be improved I tend to get superstitious and stick with whatever gets me requests for a synopsis.
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