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Trenterprise
Posted: September 6, 20132013-09-06T04:42:07+10:00 2013-09-06T04:42:07+10:00In: Public

The disfigured adopted son of a faith healer conspires to run away from home after he falls in love with glam rock and a beautiful yet rebellious crossdresser named Esmeralda in 1980s Nevada.

Esmeralda

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-09-09T17:32:07+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2013 at 5:32 pm

      Very interesting idea for a film; I want to see it.

      Maybe dpg’s concerns can be resolved by strengthen the antagonist’s (who I’m assuming is his father) role in the logline? Perhaps he “plots his escape from the tyrannical rule of his faith healing father” … something like that?

      Otherwise, if it is the aftermath of “running away” that you want to deal with, you’ll definitely need to rejig the action section of your logline.

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    2. MichaelHag Penpusher
      2013-09-09T12:39:21+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2013 at 12:39 pm

      I agree it is two adventures in one. Which one will you want to emphasize?

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    3. wilsondownunder Penpusher
      2013-09-08T15:06:34+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2013 at 3:06 pm

      Having a crisis of faith, the son of a preacher has to choose between his family and his lover, a cross dressing singer when he is accused of bringing shame on the family

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2013-09-08T04:57:14+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2013 at 4:57 am

      I agree with dpg’s point

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    5. dpg Singularity
      2013-09-08T03:04:17+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2013 at 3:04 am

      What’s the story about, making a decision to run away or the what happens after he runs away?

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