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Icebreed2006
Posted: September 14, 20132013-09-14T13:34:38+10:00 2013-09-14T13:34:38+10:00In: Public

Weeks into a zombie outbreak, an alcoholic bounty hunter is recruited by a business mogul to rescue his wayward daughter; who?s missing in a zombie ravaged New York.

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    1. Icebreed2006
      2013-09-17T08:32:06+10:00Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 8:32 am

      nicholasandrewhalls: I would like to thank you for the constructive criticism. I know you have posted comments on the various loglines I have written in the past. I would just like to thank you for being 100% real with me. I will go back and rewrite it again. I am actually going to move forward with this concept and write the screenplay.

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    2. Icebreed2006
      2013-09-17T08:09:18+10:00Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 8:09 am

      Thanks for all the feedback!

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    3. LoglinesRUS
      2013-09-17T05:38:34+10:00Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 5:38 am

      Very solid logline. Well written.

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    4. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-09-16T12:45:10+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2013 at 12:45 pm

      Playing devil’s advocate … do you need “Weeks into a zombie outbreak” if you end the logline with “who’s missing in a zombie ravage(there should be a d on the end of this word) New York.”?

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    5. wilsondownunder Penpusher
      2013-09-14T17:11:04+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 5:11 pm

      It’s good 🙂

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    6. ath579
      2013-09-14T14:47:28+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 2:47 pm

      I love the zombie genre, and this sounds pretty awesome. Great stuff.

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    7. Richiev Singularity
      2013-09-14T13:57:01+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 1:57 pm

      As far as loglines go, I believe this is solid.

      However, the idea does feel a little like “Escape from New York and zombies” (Whether that’s good or bad, I don’t know)

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