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Posted: March 29, 20182018-03-29T19:02:01+10:00 2018-03-29T19:02:01+10:00In: Adventure

When a fragile single girl wins a holiday vacation at 28, she has 3 weeks to go into a meaningful relationship or risk relapsing into depression

title: going beaches

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      variable Uberwriter
      2018-03-29T19:05:21+10:00Added an answer on March 29, 2018 at 7:05 pm

      my take:

      After winning a “couple’s ticket to heaven”, a depressed bachelorette has 3 weeks before the cruise, to make it work with one of her exes or face relapse.

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      Jessie Samurai
      2018-03-29T22:36:50+10:00Added an answer on March 29, 2018 at 10:36 pm

      Is the exact age important? Else maybe, ?fragile single woman?. The time-limit seems useful. Is that length of the vacation? Can you tell us more why this is her last chance against depression? We could always clearer, stronger stakes, and a more cutting incitive event, as variable said.

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2018-03-29T22:44:56+10:00Added an answer on March 29, 2018 at 10:44 pm

      A 3 week vacation? What a great win! That alone should help with the depression.

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      Richiev Singularity
      2018-03-30T02:39:36+10:00Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 2:39 am

      There is a disconnect between winning the cruise and falling into depression. After all, why not just take a best friend and try to meet a guy on the cruise?
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      “When she discovers her ex and his new wife will be taking the same cruise to the Bahamas, a depressed single girl has two weeks to find the perfect guy to pretend to be her date for the trip.”

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