Escape From The Mall /?Dr. Foulashop Or How I Learned To Stop Warrying And Shop Happily
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When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic.
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The main problem with this logline is, you have to read it a couple times to understand it.
These phrases are a bit confusing or awkward:
ruined shopaholic
crazy addiction treatment center
serum of mass consumption
regain the civilized world
I would try saying the same thing but in a clearer manner in order to get your story across.
what about:
“When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic.”
What’s the genre? Comedy?
It’s a comedy, like dr. strangelove.