A animal activist discovers human experiments not animal during a raid. She must survive murderous security to rescue a test subject and tell the world the truth.

Thanks FFF.

loglines are my weakest skill. I'll give it go and repost soon. ?But you have outlined the story in a nutshell. ?The human can be anyone. ?Different people bring different things.

Another female, she could see how it could be her, just some bad choices. Or a guy (my less favourite) but could have some romantic elements. ?Or as you say the kid, which will bring out more fear in the audience as a kid always seems defenceless.

Hello, I love the idea of an animal activist who discover human experiments. This is an excellent initial situation in my opinion. I like the character of an animal activist.?I think many things can happens and everything in one night raid (one action time set). It starts with an "easy" mission (to sneak in a makeup factory or whatever).?A group of activists. A clear turning point : there are humans experiments, a choice : to leave or trying to save a victim (a kid?) - the activists are killed one by one by the security. The mains characters may reach the lowest point when they are both kidnapped by the security. Then they escape and finally succed (or not).

Besides, I encourage you to work more on the logline format.