A closeted, sultry actress and a depressed, overachieving high school senior begrudgingly form a bond to overthrow a crazed anarchist bent on strengthening the divide between their two different lifestyles.

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henb · Samurai · 970 pts

I really like this logline. The descriptions of the two leads are very good! I think 'begrudgingly form a bond' could be made to sound more interesting, and you could also add why it is them who has to band together to bring down the anarchist.? The second-half to your logline is really intriguing and has the capacity for great action, drama, and comedy, and makes this a movie I really want to see.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

This version of the logline raises more questions that curiosity? in my mind. Like:

Is this conceived as a movie with dual protagonists?? And what's the inciting incident that leads the two to bond for a common purpose?

And what is the anarchist doing, specifically, that creates the wedge issue between them?? And why is he targeting them?

And what is so wrong with a divide between two lifestyles that it must be narrowed?? That happens all the? time in real life.? What's at stake if they fail to overthrow him?? Why MUST the divide be narrowed?

And by definition, anarchists reject power structures, hierarchies -- so what is there for the duo to overthrow?? Particularly, when anarchists are the ones who are supposed to be doing the overthrowing.

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dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

This version of the logline raises more questions that curiosity? in my mind. Like:

Is this conceived as a movie with dual protagonists?? And what's the inciting incident that leads the two to bond for a common purpose?

And what is the anarchist doing, specifically, that creates the wedge issue between them?? And why is he targeting them?

And what is so wrong with a divide between two lifestyles that it must be narrowed?? That happens all the? time in real life.? What's at stake if they fail to overthrow him?? Why MUST the divide be narrowed?

And by definition, anarchists reject power structures, hierarchies -- so what is there for the duo to overthrow?? Particularly, when anarchists are the ones who are supposed to be doing the overthrowing.

fwiw