A desperate father decides not to rob a bank after receiving a loving call from his wife, but a corrupt cop blackmails him to proceed or face arrest for the stolen car and intent to commit a felony. (36) – For a short 6 minute screenplay

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dnunez525 · Initiate · 50 pts

Does it have to be this short for a competition or entry to a festival? Consider making this longer.

Former member · 114,968 pts

Seems like a rather convoluted plot to set up, build to a climax and resolve in only 6 minutes.

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dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts

Seems like a rather convoluted plot to set up, build to a climax and resolve in only 6 minutes.

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