DPG (in all his briefness) is 100% correct. You've given us zero story here. Really what you've provided is the first 15 pages of the script summurised into 41 words.
I mean what is this about? Is it a horror script where the characters start getting picked off one by one. Is it a comedy where hilarious circumstances play out in the cottage? Is it a drama where the relationships of the group are put to the test?
I could go into detail about protags, goals, plot points etc but i'll just say refer to what dpg has written above. Dont give us the set-up to the story - give us the story, or at least an idea of how its going to play out.