A group therapy each of them for a different self control problem decide to take revenge after hearing the new member story.

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This doesn't read properly. I'm confused as to what the story is actually about. Check out the "Our formula" tab for help with formatting.

My questions that I have currently:

    1. Who's the protagonist?
    2. Who is getting revenge against who and how?
    3. How is this a comedy?

Once this logline is in a more conventional format, and at the very least provides answers to 1 & 2 above, it will be easier to offer more feedback.

Fwiw, I do like what I think is the idea behind this. I need more information to understand it better though.

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