Categories: War
Re: becomes the most respected, effective and feared unit in the Pacific Theater...
As currently written, the logline gives away the ending, something a logline is not supposed to do. A logline should set up the dramatic problem, but not tip its hand about the resolution.
"The Old Bastards" might be a good title for the project. But how the division --and movie-- earns that title is a question to be raised, not answered in the logline.
If it's based on real historical events, that element needs to be incorporated into the logline; to wit, this is story is based upon strange but true events.
Thank you so much!
