A single mom with 4 kids by different fathers tangle in an endless typical chore must choose between her kids and her handyman lover

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Richiev · Legend · 58,825 pts

There is a likability problem with your lead character. Why would we be interested in a woman who would even think about choosing between her children and a love interest.

Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

The ?seems to have a serious problem with relationships. ? As FFF said, "making a choice" is ?one scene, the climax of the story.

Meanwhile, what's the story that builds to the scene? ?What is the plot that forces her to [finally] choose between her 4 kids and a 5th lover? ?Why does she have to make a choice NOW? ?Didn't she have to make a choice between her kids and all her other lovers? ?What's different about this situation?

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

The ?seems to have a serious problem with relationships. ? As FFF said, "making a choice" is ?one scene, the climax of the story.

Meanwhile, what's the story that builds to the scene? ?What is the plot that forces her to [finally] choose between her 4 kids and a 5th lover? ?Why does she have to make a choice NOW? ?Didn't she have to make a choice between her kids and all her other lovers? ?What's different about this situation?