A single mom with 4 kids by different fathers tangle in an endless typical chore must choose between her kids and her handyman lover
Categories: Drama
Categories: Drama
There is a likability problem with your lead character. Why would we be interested in a woman who would even think about choosing between her children and a love interest.
The ?seems to have a serious problem with relationships. ? As FFF said, "making a choice" is ?one scene, the climax of the story.
Meanwhile, what's the story that builds to the scene? ?What is the plot that forces her to [finally] choose between her 4 kids and a 5th lover? ?Why does she have to make a choice NOW? ?Didn't she have to make a choice between her kids and all her other lovers? ?What's different about this situation?
The ?seems to have a serious problem with relationships. ? As FFF said, "making a choice" is ?one scene, the climax of the story.
Meanwhile, what's the story that builds to the scene? ?What is the plot that forces her to [finally] choose between her 4 kids and a 5th lover? ?Why does she have to make a choice NOW? ?Didn't she have to make a choice between her kids and all her other lovers? ?What's different about this situation?