A soon to be father must save the family he never wanted after his nephew is hospitalized by a gang destroying his family.

by jflyer215 · Penpusher · 20 pts February 22, 2022 10 views

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Odie · Maestro · 6,290 pts March 12, 2022

This is what I’m able to glean:
A deadbeat dad must save his family from a ruthless gang.

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Undivaga · Penpusher · 15 pts March 3, 2022

I think you have a good idea, though you need to make it clearer to the reader as the words are a bit jumbled up. It also needs a bit more explaining, at least in a synopsis, because this confuses the reader and it's hard to follow the idea. This way you can have a great logline!

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I, Little Bunny Foo Foo, incorrectly branded a monster by folklore, beat the fucking shit out of the Easter Bunny, the true candy-coated dick who uses colorful plastic eggs to prey on unsuspecting children during the holiday.

When the regime’s henchmen execute his entire congregation, a grieving priest infiltrates the tyrant’s palace as the new concierge, determined to detonate a bomb on the balcony of the Great Belfry as the tyrant addresses the crowd.

After ICE arrests his undocumented girlfriend during a raid, a quick-witted loafer who joined only to skim money from the agency he despises must risk exposure to smuggle her from detention before she is deported.

When a flight attendant smuggles on a chainsaw and starts butchering passengers mid-flight, an aerophobe must bottle his panic to take down the killer and save his family on board.

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