“A strikingly handsome and intelligent man uses his talents to make deals happen in favor of his employers. But the seemingly harmless game changes when he meets his peer. A man that turns out to be a very dangerous superior.”

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Gamechangers

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Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

What are the stakes? What does she stand to gain if she succeeds in closing the deal? The career boosting promotion she's been wanting? What does she stand to lose if she fails? Her job? Her life?

>>>"forced to make a decision"

Of course, she's forced to make a decision. That's the essence of drama: characters are forced to make decisions that put them in jeopardy. What is the specific jeopardy?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

What are the stakes? What does she stand to gain if she succeeds in closing the deal? The career boosting promotion she's been wanting? What does she stand to lose if she fails? Her job? Her life?

>>>"forced to make a decision"

Of course, she's forced to make a decision. That's the essence of drama: characters are forced to make decisions that put them in jeopardy. What is the specific jeopardy?

insomniatheatre · Penpusher · 180 pts

Maybe something like this:

?An intelligent woman uses her talents to make deals happen for a large ruthless corporation. But when she falls in love with a man who also becomes her next target, she is forced her to make a decision that puts a prize on her head"