A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.

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5 reviews

CraigDGriffiths · Overlord · 12,600 pts

Think of your reads reaction. Okay, she's training cool.

It could just be a huge training montage.

She's already strong, so what are we going to watch?

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

You should give us an event that takes place sooner than 'eons ago'
What prompts this girl, at this time, to fight the gods?

You should put her at risk. Make it so her life or the life of someone she loves is in imminent?danger.

Leviathan · Samurai · 1,555 pts

This needs work. Like for sure.

But I'm getting there. I think I know what I want this one to be.