A workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.

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Roberto Alto · Samurai · 535 pts

This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable - adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Agreed with the above comments.

Adjusting to a new life is hardly material for a story, however, if she has a major obstacle to overcome as a result of the new life it could make for a story.

What is it she does as a result of the pregnancy? Or rather, what is it she wants and does as a result of the pregnancy?

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

You should give us a stronger goal, or possibly some stakes.

"When she becomes pregnant on the verge of a promotion, a single workaholic business woman must complete a multi-Billion dollar merger, all while negotiating her pregnancy and ?a rival looking looking to take advantage of any misstep."

DanielSturman · Penpusher · 215 pts

Is the inciting incident the discovery of the pregnancy or the birth/ongoing motherhood? It's hard to suddenly land in motherhood, unless her sister dies and she has to raise an already-born baby?