A young scubadiver stumbles onto an ancient alien device that imbues him with superhuman abilities. This enables him to establish world peace and spark mankind into becoming a space faring civilization.

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Chaocosm

3 reviews

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Are you trying to launch another super-hero franchise? Or is this story a one trick, one ride pony?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Are you trying to launch another super-hero franchise? Or is this story a one trick, one ride pony?

CamillaBeskow · Penpusher · 165 pts

I feel like this logline lacks conflict. If finding these abilities simply enables him to establish world peace, then what's the problem? What obsticles will he be forced to overcome?