After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts ★ Accepted

I don't think back then they said twister much. Replace it with tornado, perhaps? She really isn't that lonely, she has her dog, maybe work that in instead?

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

Yes she wants to return home -- to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The "lesson learned" is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn't just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe -- she wants to return to Kansas to be with the people she loves.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Yes she wants to return home -- to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The "lesson learned" is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn't just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe -- she wants to return to Kansas to be with the people she loves.

DanielSturman · Penpusher · 215 pts

There's a motivation problem in Wizard of Oz. She wants to go home the moment from the moment she gets there, yet 'theirs no place like home' is the moral?

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Good logline. Perhaps would be best to mention the wicked witch of the west?

After a tornado transports a Kansas girl to a magical land, she must defeat a wicked witch on her journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.