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Too many words here. Remember, less is more with log lines. Try this out... (1) After surviving a gang style attack, a youth pastor goes for the kill OR (2) After surviving a gang style attack, a youth pastor has revenge in mind, refusing to leave vengeance to God.
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This is very strong. However, I think the youth pastor taking revenge for the ones that didn't survive might be interesting as well. Could create an interesting moral dilemma for the story.
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