After his egg family joins the “high class vegetarians”–due to his proposed thesis–Scrambled Jr. must resolve the growing vengeance of non-vegetables towards the privileges of being a vegetable

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With the objective to indirectly address the issue of untouchability in India

possible title: “off the shelf (and into the war)”

premise: an egg must stop the war he feels responsible for–between the vegetables and the non-vegetables

(page 120 spoiler for its franchise)
…only to realize their one true enemy… the you-mans!!

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

You shouldn't use a thesis as your inciting incident.

What specific even sets your lead character into motion?
What must your lead character do?
What is standing in his way?

Why would an egg become a high-class vegetarian?

wind · Logliner · 340 pts

you could start your logline with:
In a world where the vegetables and the non-vegetables have differing social classes...

hope it helps