After shy high school girl’heart treatment goes wrong and as result she develops supernatural ability of mind control,she must fight to expose the doctor who caused her transformation
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Invincible
Categories: Drama
Invincible
INVINCIBLE -?An obese high school virgin with diabetes who stays home all day and plays online chess hones her power of telekinisis until one day she's exposed by the CIA and forced to use her power to help them capture a deadly Russian gang of Mind Terrorists
You need a bigger goal than just to expose the doctor. ?What is the doctors plan? What is his purpose for his experiments? Stopping his plan should be the goal, how about this:
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"After she is tricked into an experimental treatment by a ruthless doctor, a shy student must use her new found abilities to take down the evil scientist and stop his plan to take over the world."
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Obviously I don't know what the doctor plans are in your story's are so in my logline I used the more generic "Take over the world" so your logline would be different in that respect; but the general idea of the logline would be the same
Hope that helped
If you want the supernatural ability to be a problem for her, then make up a side effect that she must overcome and be specific.
Whatever, I still don't understand how exposing the doctor is? going to make her normal again.? Can the mistake be undone?? Or must she learn to live with it?
Whatever, I still don't understand how exposing the doctor is? going to make her normal again.? Can the mistake be undone?? Or must she learn to live with it?
Both of them,just just wish to be normal