An aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.

by Bindercd · Initiate · 80 pts May 16, 2017 609 views

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CaptainMayI19pp · Wordsmith · 405 pts May 17, 2017

The above is good. Protag flaw not in, but effective.? Would change the above to: After his wife is brutally raped and murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks redemption with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts May 17, 2017

"After his wife is brutally raped an murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks revenge with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter."

CaptainMayI19pp · Wordsmith · 405 pts May 16, 2017

Krav? Maga? It's karate but you have to identify for the reader what it is.? What's the risk to the hero? Good start.

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When the regime’s henchmen execute his entire congregation, a grieving priest infiltrates the tyrant’s palace as the new concierge, determined to detonate a bomb on the balcony of the Great Belfry as the tyrant addresses the crowd.

After ICE arrests his undocumented girlfriend during a raid, a quick-witted loafer who joined only to skim money from the agency he despises must risk exposure to smuggle her from detention before she is deported.

When a flight attendant smuggles on a chainsaw and starts butchering passengers mid-flight, an aerophobe must bottle his panic to take down the killer and save his family on board.

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