An aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.
Categories: Action
3 reviews
The above is good. Protag flaw not in, but effective.? Would change the above to: After his wife is brutally raped and murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks redemption with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.
"After his wife is brutally raped an murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks revenge with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter."
Krav? Maga? It's karate but you have to identify for the reader what it is.? What's the risk to the hero? Good start.