An indigenous ward of the state is released from juvenile prison and fostered to a reputable white family who threaten to lie to his parole officer and get him incarcerated, unless he helps them with a heist.

You both raise good points thank you.

I agree with Nir Shelter. ? A?protagonist needs to be proactive, but in this case, the logline only reveals a ?character who is?acted upon rather than acting, a victim of others rather than a active ?agent of his own life.

Given the situation, what becomes his objective goal? ?What does he intend to do about the predicament he finds himself in?

I agree with Nir Shelter. ? A?protagonist needs to be proactive, but in this case, the logline only reveals a ?character who is?acted upon rather than acting, a victim of others rather than a active ?agent of his own life.

Given the situation, what becomes his objective goal? ?What does he intend to do about the predicament he finds himself in?