As a ranking officer battles to keep himself and his comrades alive and sane in the final months of the great war, a chance encounter with his lost love finally brings the truth of why she disappeared with their baby girl a decade ago and inspires him to try and rekindle the life together that was so prematurely taken from them.

by Greg_Barnett · Penpusher · 165 pts 633 views

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A White Feather

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Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

K.I.S.S.= Keep It Simple Stupid. The logline is not only too long, but it is also too complicated.

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

K.I.S.S.= Keep It Simple Stupid. The logline is not only too long, but it is also too complicated.

Greg_Barnett · Penpusher · 165 pts

Thanks for your comments, I'm afraid i don't know the rule of K.I.S.S Please would you explain it to me?
Also when you write weakness, is that in regards to the description of the character? Thanks