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A murderius vigilante must avoid arrest and the wraith of the community she is trying to protect.

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Did you mean to write wraith or wrath?

"after a barely surviving a brutal rape a murderous vigilant must avoid increased police activity and the wraith of the community she is trying to protect to get justice."

Does she want revenge or just justice? Does she want to kill the rapist or help put them in jail? And again, does she have special equipment or abilities? Who is the antagonist?

On another note, a comment on the inciting incident. Rape is a horrible thing. It's a violation. Which is why so many writers like to use it as a shortcut to create empathy. Then they stop, and don't explore the very serious topic of rape in a meaningful way. They just use it as a plot device to make the bad guy worse and in an attempt to create a traumatic story for a female character.

I bring this up because people have begun to notice this trope. Especially on shows like Game of Thrones. So much so that there articles discussing it, and producers don't like it like in this article. I'm not saying you're using it in this way but your logline just made think about that.

after a barely surviving a brutal rape a murderous vigilant must avoid increased police activity and the wraith of the community she is trying to protect to get justice.

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