Eyes opened to a blue sky, peeping in through the wholes of the make shift roof, he regained from a dreamless state, ready for the day, parched, quiet, cool and collected. First things first, to the copper water tumbler,still groggy he flt better as the metallic tasting water cooled his innards.

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Blue Day

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sharkeatingman · Mentor · 3,435 pts

This has to be the opening line of the first scene, accidentally cut and pasted instead of the logline.

That's the only explanation I can offer...and still maintain my forum decorum...