Four scientists review the calculations for a devastating weapon, while the team leader, Pascual, begins to question even his own reality.

The logline in its current state is unclear. We lack the relevant information to understand why reviewing calculations for this weapon relates to him questioning his own reality.

What happens in this story? Does anything happen when they're testing this weapon to cause him to question his reality? What is this character going to do in this story?

Scientists testing a devastating weapon is a good start, but we need more story content to visualise what this movie will be like.

The logline lacks causality and coherence. What is the causal connection between the weapon and the main character's questioning of reality? Also, the main character has no objective goal; there is no indication of a plot.