In a future totalitarian state, a reclusive IT expert finds himself dragged into the shadows to lead the resistance and save the world.

Snowden, much?

>>finds himself dragged

Passive. The protagonist role should always be stated in the active mode. Even if the inciting incident gets him involved against his initial intent or will, he becomes proactive by Act 2.

And what's the inciting incident that triggers him to get involved?

Also, "save the world" is a clich?. His objective goal has something to do overthrowing the totalitarian state (I presume).

>>finds himself dragged

Passive. The protagonist role should always be stated in the active mode. Even if the inciting incident gets him involved against his initial intent or will, he becomes proactive by Act 2.

And what's the inciting incident that triggers him to get involved?

Also, "save the world" is a clich?. His objective goal has something to do overthrowing the totalitarian state (I presume).