In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.

by dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts 950 views

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Tony Edward · Maestro · 4,315 pts ★ Accepted

Sorry -- I missed that the hero is a 'He'

Just my take below:

"A reclusive home-schooled teenager becomes the star forward for the varsity basketball team but struggles against?public ?ridicule when he is ?outed ?for being the bastard son of a local prostitute."

No real improvement, but just my take. Best of luck - I like. :)

Karel Segers · Maestro · 2,890 pts

+1 on him being as the Event of the story. "When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must....."

CraigDGriffiths · Legend · 12,600 pts

Nice set up. A bit to much background (home schooled). My question is

And then.....?

It feels like the story is about to start. Does he change attitudes of people, does he fit back, does he seek revenge?

Two hours of watching this guy getting bullied doesn't sound appealing.

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