Hello,
I suggest you to read this article about a script who shares some similarities with your concept:
http://scriptshadow.net/screenplay-review-monster-problems/
It's the story of a young boy living in a bunker underground who decide to go outside to find a girl but this future world is full of big monsters.
I think that if you can mention an objective reason for the boy to go outside we will have a better understanding of the plot.
And if you can change "the wilderness and the rogues that inhabit it" with something that can give the reader a visual picture of what there will be in the movie, the logline would be more powerful.