Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must cooperate with an alien rebels to find a way home.

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variable · Mentor · 6,740 pts

When a lost space driver meets an alien rebel possessing the tech to locate home, she battles alongside him against his evil overlord to obtain it
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A lost space captain battles alongside an alien rebel against his evil overlord in exchange for the radar tech to return home
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Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

Thanks for the assistance, Kaz.

I've been using this lately:

Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must side with alien rebels and defeat ruthless conquerors to hopefully claim the advanced technology needed to return home.

Kaznats · Logliner · 315 pts

I've offered you an edit before but here is another, thanks for reading mine.

The crew of a deep space rescue ship have one choice, reveal their home planet's location to alien marauders or remain lost in space forever.

Kaznats · Logliner · 315 pts

Hmmm, cooperate seems a bit weak perhaps

Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must chose sides in an alien rebellion against another species if they wish to return ?home

Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

Been using this to pitch with:

?Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must side with alien rebels to battle ruthless conquerors in exchange for the advanced technology needed to return home.?