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I think your log line would sound better as follows -
When an expert hunter discovers a ferocious beast, he risks his reputation if he doesn’t pursue and capture it to save a village at the expense of endangering his team mates.
What do you think?
“he’s†Not the protagonist. Best in a logline to state the protagonist upfront.
Best to start...â€When (protagonist). Say what happens/occurs...then what they must do or not do and why...and what will be the result if or if the goal isn’t met.
Richiev's version is an improvement.