Masters of Purgatory

Thanks. That makes sense. I changed it and reposted.

It's best to leave out protag names. Are they angels? What are they trying to achieve? I assume God is the antagonist. How is he keeping them from achieving their goal?

I can't even offer an alternative logline because you don't provide enough information about your story. Like jamesmichael says, it's read more like a tagline, albeit a little long. The hint of a story is intriguing to me though. I'd be interested when you come up with an updated logline.

I'm sorry, I just meant from this website, in the 'write it,' section.

https://loglines.org/howto/ .

It gives an outline of what's needed in a logline.