On a dive mission, a marine biologist encounters a mermaid who takes him to a secret location of Atlantis. He finds out he is of royal decent and must free the spell of an evil tyrant.

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Stauber · Wordsmith · 385 pts

On a dive mission, a marine biologist encounters a mermaid who takes him to Atlantis as it is plagued by the spell of an evil tyrant and revealing his royal ancestry.

Just rearranged it, not sure if its actually any better or not but something to think about.

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